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Fic - Speed Racer (Movie '08) - Yakuza/Taejo

Oct 01, 2008 04:52

Title: Driving Free
Pairing: Teppedoma (Yakuza) x Taejo Togokhan

Rating: PG-13

Description: A conversation and more. (god I’m awful at descriptions)
Disclaimer: I don’t own Speed Racer or any of its characters.

( Driving Free )

taejo togokhan, yakuza racer, fic, speed racer

Comments 5

lali_lemons October 2 2008, 09:35:21 UTC

I love it! I honestly didn't know what to think about this pairing besides it was hot XD but you made me love it and think it completely plausible!!

I enjoy your spin on Teppi's past and ideals. I also like his lack of trust... but he somehow trusts Taejo. It's such a subtle thing that I might just be stressing myself but I love what it brings to that moment where Taejo touches/kisses him.

I don't know if you want any criticisms or not... and it truly doesn't bother me one way or another I still love it and can easily look past such little things... but

“You never did answer my question, what are you doing here?” Teppedoma finished up the rest of his fixes and looked of at the younger racer. - He never actually asked him what he was doing there ( ... )

stratataisen October 2 2008, 12:05:15 UTC

Thank You! ^-^

I don't mind criticisms at all, espically if it helps me in my writing. I get what you're saying, and I think in my twisted little mind he kind of did ask a question....but then again my mind doesn't seem to be always there. lol I'll change it so it'll fit.

rofl I liked that line too. It just seemed like something Taejo would say.

And YES! I totally agree, the titles are the hardest things to write. >.< I almost didn't have a title for this one. lol

Hopfully I'll be writing more, though I do have something cooking up in my mind. (another crack pairing, buecase I just can't say no to them.)

lali_lemons October 2 2008, 17:15:38 UTC

I've done it too, my mind often runs quicker than my fingers and I'll swear I typed something when I didn't. <3 Teppi's such an interesting character. I think eventually I won't be able to stop myself from throwing myself into the fray and writing my own little version of him. I fear for that day XD

I'm pretty sure the crackiest thing I ever wrote was Insepctor Detector / Sparky... it was just... odd XD but amusing.

YAY! I'm looking forward to it! <3

stratataisen October 2 2008, 21:14:38 UTC

Insepctor/Sparky, now that is crack. lol. I was think writing some Racer X/Taejo or Racer X/Teppi.

Oh, I heard Teppi's name in the movie! =3 I watched right after I read your last post and I squeeled when I heard it. XD

anonymous October 10 2008, 05:43:17 UTC

I was waiting for a fanfic with this pairing to come out. You don't know how happy you just made me. ^_^

If I remember correctly the yakuza driver worked for Mushu Motors, Togokhan's rival who was attempting to buy them out. You can see the company logo on his glove when he's putting his helmet on. (And yes...I'm that obsessed I actually sat there and stared.) I'd love to see a fic between the two of them involving this little fact. Adds a bit of drama and conflict to a very handsome looking crack pairing.XD

Please write more!