Journey ~The Beginning~

[reinnya]

Title: Journey ~The Beginning~
Author: reinnya
Genre: fantasy, romance
Rating: G - General
Warnings: -
Critique: Yes, quick look through to give it your worst)
Summary: a new girl transferred to the city most exclusive school but then she realize the school is different than the other school. they divide the class into Regular Class and Special Class

Comments

[clairebunny87]

I like this idea so far, and I'm very impressed - I saw on your journal profile that English isn't your first language! There are a number of English grammatical errors here, too many to go through in a comment I think, but these could easily be solved by getting a good English-speaking beta-reader to go through them with you