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chavelaprincess August 27 2008, 03:36:43 UTC
ILU! ♥

Thanks so much for rec'ing this. I adore it.

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chaotic4life August 28 2008, 08:04:08 UTC
:) I'll thank you anyway, cause you are awesome *smishes you*

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chavelaprincess August 27 2008, 03:38:15 UTC
VERY GOOD!
My friend kendas rec'd this to me, and I just ADORE IT!

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chaotic4life August 28 2008, 08:03:31 UTC
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad that you liked it.

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ilovesn August 31 2008, 05:27:23 UTC
It might be that i'm pretty sleepy at the moment but i don't get this line at the end:

The last time he woke up next to Steve. He woke up.

I loved the fic, it was great that you showed how Jensen was feeling. the intensity and the need.

The desperate way he needed more of Steve and the way he didn't realize how much he'd wanted it.

If i misinterpreted, i blame the sleepy :D

Overall, kickass story

Thanks for sharing

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chaotic4life August 31 2008, 12:14:29 UTC
Mmh ..you are the second person who mentions that you don't get the last line, so I doubt it has anything to do with your lack of sleep and more to do with my way to express myself. Seriously, it makes perfect sense in my head *lol*

I described three times how Jensen woke up and it took him years and event to wake up from his stupor to realize that Steve might be what he was looking for all along.

Guess next time I need to be more specific. :)

Thanks for taking the time to leave a detailed comment, and I am happy you liked it despite the end.

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ilovesn September 3 2008, 02:40:39 UTC
*facepalm*

I get it now *giggles*

I'm an idiot ;D

Thanks for letting me know

It was really awesome

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tigerpinky September 7 2008, 18:43:24 UTC
Very nice, it pulled me right along. Hot too.

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