Asperations

May 08, 2009 22:48

Being a child ( Read more... )

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jenandbronze May 9 2009, 18:49:29 UTC
This is a pretty neat piece... what brought on writing this?

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creature_girl08 May 10 2009, 03:49:56 UTC
Glad you like it. The week one topic for the
brigits_flame monthly writing contest is on aspiration. This just flowed and although it may be amiture it was something I wanted to put down on paper.

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johnmill79 May 9 2009, 21:58:05 UTC
Did you write this? Either way it touched me. I don't yet have a child even, and I'm still struggling with how much more difficult the real world is than I'd anticipated. Thanks for this.

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creature_girl08 May 10 2009, 03:51:54 UTC
Yes, I did write this. I also do not have kids of the two legged kind. But being an aunt 20 plus times and having all the animals I do it was easy to write.

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mistvieh May 9 2009, 23:34:11 UTC
A young boy became a teacher
A young girl finished school
Then became a writer of books
A man stopped drinking
And went back to his wife
This person’s parents were proud
But never got the chance to tell them so

This stanza was my favorite. :-)

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creature_girl08 May 10 2009, 03:56:16 UTC
Smile! This was the stanza that didn't come right away. Glad you liked it.

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cedarwolfsinger May 12 2009, 01:50:28 UTC
This is a lovely piece. Just another proof that you never know who you might inspire just being the person you are.

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creature_girl08 May 16 2009, 07:18:56 UTC
Thank you, I appreciate it very much.

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creature_girl08 May 16 2009, 07:13:43 UTC
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for writing.

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