Talisman

[creekstersheart]

He tides in
My quiet heart stops
He is the better angel of my nature
The devil shaping my imperfection

His greatness is the struggle
He is stunning in that simple disgrace

Comments

[anonymous]

i love it when someone can do what you just did in 6 lines (like you just did).
wow.

Adam Cruse

[anonymous]

I really like this one...and have felt the feelings you are trying to capture.

It's really good.

Keep them coming. :D

Fairy Leopard

[anonymous]

'He tides in' is a fabulous, lingering opening line. *nods*

let it be known

[agapecrusader]

I for one will smile when I read this, but I for one want to be known who I am hehe the thought of anonymous by my words anywhere is frightening. Again I must say, your words are simple , elegant and beautiful. If I were a publisher I would publish you first. I am becoming your number one fan very quickly. Stay beautiful always.

[anonymous]

So perfectly simple and yet so complex emotionally. I loved it!

sinfulwriting