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[creekstersheart]

In the sweat of this summer squander she is my
Air conditioning
She moves over my body…
She makes me feel (cool)…so cool
She blows onto me so smoothly
She blows me so sweetly and it always
Feels good to lay beneath her

In the footsteps of fall coming
I wrap myself in her reddening warmth
The sleet beats off her cheeks when
she’s in heat and though she

Comments

[anonymous]

you have good taste and i love your poetry. i'm adding you :)

KARA (spunkified)

[anonymous]

The second stanza is my favorite. That is some awesome writing.

bekah_ellen

[anonymous]

wow..that was really good...
there was a lot of awesome imagery... =)

if you don't mind me asking, are you talking about an ex-girlfriend? ( *if* that's the case. hehe. i don't mean to assume...hell, it's been almost 7 months since i got cheated on and broken up with...i loved her though. best relationship of my entire life...)
either way, you're very talented and seem to have a unique style.
very flowing.

norabear

[creekstersheart]

Hey -- no actually, I'm a straight female so I have no ex-girlfriends. :) I'm glad you appreciated the piece. Thanks a lot :)

[anonymous]

ohhh okay.
my bad. lol. i feel stupid now. maybe i just still have my ex on my mind. hehe

you're really pretty though :- )
hehe

norabear

[creekstersheart]

Hehe... that's ok. And thanks for the compliment :)

Take it easy,
J

[anonymous]

Her taste is waning, her scent is fading
I can't stand her face
Just have to get her out of my space
I'll miss her
When I'm loving the next girl to replace her

im afraid this is exactly how the boy i like feels.

flawed_secrets

[creekstersheart]

It's possible. Lots of men are that way. The boy I used to "date" felt that way. If you even THINK it's the case.... get out now. It's really not worth it. A suggestion? Read the book "He's just not that into you." You'll see yourself in it. Then you'll realize what you're worth. Then you'll get rid of the guy who can't see it and find one who can't live without it.

:)
J

[anonymous]

know i deserve more. its just hes so amazing that i dont want to let an inkling of him get away until i find someone just as amazing.

i guess im a bit selfish. buti know the right move here. ive been analyzing it over and over in my head what each outcome would be.

flawed_secrets

[creekstersheart]

I felt just that way. But the honest truth is that it's not selfishness, it's stupidity. If he's not treating you right, it's not the right move... period.

Wish you all the best. :)

J

[anonymous]

i like it. :)

[get a taste of this.]