Accusation for an Old Friend

[creekstersheart]

I can’t seem to get down from here

It’s true what they say

I don’t really know why I stay

These legs undermine my mind

And I dread turning to find the

same damn face

words

expression

Same fucking voice

And now have come to expect a twist in my chest

You induce slow steps to poison this

Temple

It’s intentional

Comments

[waterudoin]

Wow, I really like this one. I love the imagery. It really helped in getting your intention across.

-Christopher

[creekstersheart]

Thanks! :) How have you been??

[waterudoin]

I've been up and down and all over the place, but I can't complain. Well, yes I can, but I won't.
Good to see your poems up. Please keep posting because I really love your stuff.
Oh yeah, and good luck with the dieting competition thingy you're in.

-Christopher

[anonymous]

I really liked this

- Ian Morgan (mrianmorgan)

[anonymous]

I love the first line - it really hooked me.

Ariel (faerieariel)

[anonymous]

i love the ending..very powerful
you should come join our community over at onelinecreative

pandorarazz

[anonymous]

Oh, I've felt like that. Very well written.

Thanks for sharing.

-Sarah (aggirl3)