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Nov 17, 2005 00:47


It’s so amazing when I write about food on order

A glimpse into my mind to see “love, me”

I’m hypnotizing when I share thoughts on

The down spiral of video game technology

I am playing you because I need to

I should probably apologize after you see

I’ll turn you off just before you begin

I don’t want to catch wind of what you’re hiding in

I know I’ ( Read more... )

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anonymous November 17 2005, 07:09:15 UTC
This is am amazing poem!!

Chelsie (silver_snaffle)

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anonymous November 17 2005, 12:37:35 UTC
bloody cool!

daniel_gleeson

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skeletormessiah November 17 2005, 17:22:57 UTC
god.. Ive decided that relationships suck

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creekstersheart November 17 2005, 19:13:00 UTC
LOL What do you mean?
J

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skeletormessiah November 17 2005, 19:32:41 UTC
it seems that every bit of poetry or drama lately stems from a relationship problem.. Im so sick of drama!! Good job on the poem though.. Im sorry I neglected to say that. Heh, I should become a monk.

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un_malpaso November 27 2005, 14:35:46 UTC
I like it a lot!
I can see it being set to music... that's meant as a compliment, although it stands alone well too.

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