Encounter

Dec 28, 2004 22:36

Peel back my corners ( Read more... )

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anonymous December 28 2004, 21:55:40 UTC
I love this writing. I love your use of words and form.

-n i c k s i l l u m e (nicksillume)

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anonymous December 29 2004, 07:28:43 UTC
Great poem :)

-shadow_n_box

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anonymous December 29 2004, 07:30:01 UTC
I like this. I like the imagery, the art beneath a surface painting...lurking in my own shadows. I really like this. It flows beautifully. kaite

-kaitesquill

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i think anonymous December 29 2004, 07:31:22 UTC
i think your poem, is about love and the glory that it holds within us! here but yet gone, close but yet so far! that is what love is the unfulfilled yet still desireable! great work!

-tilwenextmeet

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anonymous December 29 2004, 11:31:59 UTC
Nice poem jenn - I want to get to know you under the lid yo. I love you alot. I hope you have a kick ass time in Wakee.

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