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Ash : One

Mar 29, 2011 23:30

Title: Ash
Rating: R
Warnings: Non-con, violence, horses
Fandom: YYH (AU)
Pairing: Karasu/Kurama
Summary: Kurama’s world ended when outlaws came to town.
Notes: For the prompt of the yyh_kinkmeme . It’s since turned into a planned Multiple chaptered fic rather than a oneshot.
Also: OH MY GOD IT'S A WESTERN. Yes, it's blink and miss at the moment but I'm ( Read more... )

karasu/kurama, non-con, ash, r, au, western, bui

Comments 9

sekahyyh March 29 2011, 19:26:54 UTC

That was...

That was...

Marvelous, fantastic, sumptuous, gorgeous, lovely, in every way perfect, exactly what I wanted when I prompted it, and now I have to read it again.

Some stories you just can't get enough of, and Ash is one of those. <3

creepstakes April 5 2011, 16:13:26 UTC

I realise I seemed to have skipped over the whipping, but rest assured I'll work a bull-whipping in there. :D

I'm very glad that it pleases you. <3

sekahyyh April 5 2011, 16:54:52 UTC

Are you kidding me? There's gonna be a whipping scene? OSOIMARU FANCLUB, I'M STARTING ONE.

nytekit April 7 2011, 05:59:57 UTC

*JOINS FANCLUB*

nytekit March 29 2011, 22:57:37 UTC

Oh. My. God.

That was...so very amazing. Oh my God. I really don't think I can form anything more coherent. You-I love you. That was just...amazing.

And there's more than one chapter.

And Karasu's keeping him.

Oh God, this is totally going to outstrip what I expected for this prompt. Can't wait!

EDIT: Oh, I did notice a couple of times towards the end where you used Karasu's name instead of Kurama's. I think I first noticed it at One strike too many .

creepstakes April 5 2011, 16:15:43 UTC

I caught two wrong name uses, but I'll read over it again and make sure later. I've noticed a few repetitive things towards the end. Thanks for pointing it out. Hard to read with an objective eye when you know what it's going to say.

I'm introducing a few more characters in the next chapter(s) so hopefully it'll please you even further. <3

onlyinthislight April 5 2011, 04:50:50 UTC

Oh my, consider my "dragged back by the ankle" button firmly pressed. Well done!

creepstakes April 5 2011, 16:16:40 UTC

Oh, you like that too?

Glad to know I'm not the only one.

I'm very glad that you enjoyed it.

stillthere4me April 9 2011, 18:31:53 UTC

I mentioned this on the kink meme already, but that last part especially--the fact that Bui's considering a whore's dress is just perfect in my head.

I'm very curious to see where this will go. And if any other of the well known characters will pop up as well, if there are any more in the "merry little band of fuck ups."

Definitely interested in the next part, and looking forward to it. :)