Sep 14, 2007 23:55
my heart stops longer.
fighting for mornings
or a wind.
throwing my head back,
gasping for air and warmth.
battling with the sun for its time.
but every night down 167,
i feel the stars for you.
i count them for me.
i am sand.
you are water.
i can only sink to the bottom
or drift with you.
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awful and trite but
somehow
more appropriate than plain prose
you are in love!
I'm happy for you
and also I wonder
what did you eat for breakfast?
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I'm thinking of you
and hope
all is well in your life
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i've thought of you a few times this month. wondering how you are.
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I'm ok--kind of profoundly bummed out, but muddling along nicely.
What's your story, these days?
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