Poetry at 1am

[crescentdreams]

Okay, it's not 1am. It was when I first starting thinking of this though.

Dealing Alone

Comments

[stonebutterfly]

I like both...

But I think they're separate pieces..

Unless you bring it back in a circle and tie the first again to a last bit to round it off.

*hug* You popped on and off AIM too fast for me to hug. Love ya mommakat.

I agree

[jwyldragon]

They feel like part of completely different poems. The flow is different as are the 'feelings' they invoke. ::shrugs n hugs:: hope it helps.