Uwah this was so beautiful and I loved almost everything about it. It made me laugh and it also made me sad and I'm just so glad you wrote it. ♥
I guess the only thing that really took me aback a bit was the handwritten entries at the end? Haha maybe it's just my personal headcanon but I always thought Lelouch's penmanship would be impeccable. Typing it up in a script format may lend better to the effect.
Aside from that though, this was really lovely and I'll definitely be recommending it to people!
Thank you so much for the comment! :) I'm terribly happy with the way this one turned out, so I'm so pleased that others are enjoying it. ♥
Thank you also for the suggestion on the journal entries at the end-- but while I understand your point, I wanted to connect those journals to the list of names that had been strung throughout his travels with Suzaku (which, quite frankly, would be a mess to try and re-create at this point). Sorry my handwriting is a mess, but I'll keep that in mind for the future!
Additionally, and I've no idea if this helps with your head canon, I had toyed with the idea that one of the things that Lelouch lost when he was injured was some of his fine motor control, and that could account for the altered handwriting?
Thank you again for commenting! I really appreciate every comment I get, so I hope you see this some day? ♥
AH, I'm the same anon who commented on your master list actually! :D
And your explanation for the handwriting makes sense, I could definitely see the loss of final motor skills happening. I didn't mean to say your handwriting was bad or anything just that I thought he would have written in script or something. I hope I didn't offend you! ;; (I'm sorry if the comment was rude ahhh.)
(I forgot to mention in my original comment actually that I really liked the list of names thing! Was that in any way inspired by Heero's little journey in Gundam Wing? In any case it was a really nice touch and I loved that part especially!)
Your comment wasn't rude, not at all! I'm constantly told that my handwriting is pretty bad, tbh, so I really am terribly sorry that it pulled you out of the fic. >.< Really, though, I hadn't written the loss of motor skills in to any great extent (I hinted at them here and there, but like many other things it wasn't delved into in great detail), so I'm glad you questioned it! I will definitely keep your comments in mind if I do another prompt where we would see his handwriting, so thank you very much
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I guess the only thing that really took me aback a bit was the handwritten entries at the end? Haha maybe it's just my personal headcanon but I always thought Lelouch's penmanship would be impeccable. Typing it up in a script format may lend better to the effect.
Aside from that though, this was really lovely and I'll definitely be recommending it to people!
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Thank you also for the suggestion on the journal entries at the end-- but while I understand your point, I wanted to connect those journals to the list of names that had been strung throughout his travels with Suzaku (which, quite frankly, would be a mess to try and re-create at this point). Sorry my handwriting is a mess, but I'll keep that in mind for the future!
Additionally, and I've no idea if this helps with your head canon, I had toyed with the idea that one of the things that Lelouch lost when he was injured was some of his fine motor control, and that could account for the altered handwriting?
Thank you again for commenting! I really appreciate every comment I get, so I hope you see this some day? ♥
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And your explanation for the handwriting makes sense, I could definitely see the loss of final motor skills happening. I didn't mean to say your handwriting was bad or anything just that I thought he would have written in script or something. I hope I didn't offend you! ;; (I'm sorry if the comment was rude ahhh.)
(I forgot to mention in my original comment actually that I really liked the list of names thing! Was that in any way inspired by Heero's little journey in Gundam Wing? In any case it was a really nice touch and I loved that part especially!)
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Your comment wasn't rude, not at all! I'm constantly told that my handwriting is pretty bad, tbh, so I really am terribly sorry that it pulled you out of the fic. >.< Really, though, I hadn't written the loss of motor skills in to any great extent (I hinted at them here and there, but like many other things it wasn't delved into in great detail), so I'm glad you questioned it! I will definitely keep your comments in mind if I do another prompt where we would see his handwriting, so thank you very much ( ... )
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