Comments | crimeandcricket: Drabble: "Safecracker" (Bunny/Raffles, rated teen)

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Drabble: "Safecracker" (Bunny/Raffles, rated teen)

Jun 24, 2011 22:32

Title: Safecracker
Author: kindkit
Pairing: Bunny/Raffles
Rating: Teen
Warnings: None needed
Word count: 100
Summary: Raffles' magic.
Notes: This was written in response to a prompt from mcicioni. It blends TV-verse and bookverse; I haven't attempted to pastiche Hornung's prose style.

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slash, fanfiction, raffles/bunny

Comments 16

nakeisha June 25 2011, 08:44:29 UTC

I really like this.

Very well done.

kindkit June 27 2011, 03:04:04 UTC

Thank you!

delvinan June 25 2011, 09:50:14 UTC

Ooh, nice! I like the wordplay and hope you'll feel inspired to contribute more to this fandom!

kindkit June 27 2011, 03:04:22 UTC

Thanks!

altopiano June 25 2011, 11:50:34 UTC

Oh, I love this! You convey wonderfully how Bunny is helpless to resist Raffles - and that he knows it. Beautifully done.

kindkit June 27 2011, 03:05:28 UTC

Thank you. I have to admit I find Bunny's inability to resist Raffles quite endearing.

mcicioni June 25 2011, 22:30:03 UTC

Fantastic! Funny and intense - and I can see R's supremely confident grin. Love the last line. Thank you ♥

kindkit June 27 2011, 03:05:52 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks.

storyfan June 26 2011, 01:32:15 UTC

"criminal ecstasy" - how descriptive that is!

Great job!

kindkit June 27 2011, 03:06:22 UTC

Thank you!