Comments | crimson_leaf: I need help.

crimson_leaf

I need help.

Feb 28, 2006 21:09

I need help with my BYU essay. It could only be 300 words, so I really had to cut it, anyway, please tell me what you think ( Read more... )

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bluemoon_lily March 4 2006, 19:26:40 UTC

I think it sounds good but maybe could be made extra unique by giving a few specific examples that prove that you have qualities that byu wants.

If you have time, give a copy to one or two friends who know you well, a parent and maybe even a teacher who you trust. Ask them for pointers because if they feel like you represented yourself well, then BYU will know exactly who you are.

:) Hope some of this helps.

crimson_leaf March 5 2006, 21:05:28 UTC

thank you =D that does help =D

BEAutiful tinydancer_dez May 9 2006, 20:14:05 UTC

Wow dud, really, all I can really say is wow. I agree with you though, your spirituallity is what sets you apart from others. You're awesome, Only thing I can really is is that you say yet a lot in it, and I'm probably way way late in telling you this, and what not, but I'll say it anyways. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOX