For Maddie:

Nov 14, 2004 20:57

I wrote this one last year at the beginning. I think it was a little after my family realized that my grandpa had been dead for a whole year and I was still a bit bitter about events that had transpired the summer before ( Read more... )

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blackpaladin23 November 16 2004, 05:33:02 UTC
Interesting, though I'm inclined to disagree with the negative press given to corruption and the assumption that there is necessarily innocence in existence to be overthrown. Corruption is a tool, innocence is a façade. Looking objectively, I am very corrupt, nothing approaching innocent, and quite happy at the moment.

Still, it's nice to hear that this brings back good memories for you. It's been quite a while since I've heard much positive stuff out of you. I forgot to comment in the other entry of yours, but I'm glad you've gotten things straightened out.

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crimson_raven November 16 2004, 18:42:32 UTC
by corruption I mean actual corruption of the mind. Like depression, bi-polar, multiple personality disorder, etc. Not evil per se. As for the innocence I mean back before we've seen things like deaths of friends and families. There was a time before we understood hate crime and gang violence. And when the veil falls its ment as in it will eventually fall but, when it does we cant let things we've naively ignored in the past get to us. But, I'm glad you critiqued ^_^ thank you.

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rlgisme3 November 16 2004, 13:54:09 UTC
i really like it. your writings amazing. and i am glad you feel all good and tingly. :)

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broomstick88 November 16 2004, 17:57:45 UTC
awwww, you let me read a poem. i feel all special now. it's really good phill. keep with it, pretty please with a stripper on top

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