Janus: Conclusion - Location Unknown - 2007

Jun 27, 2008 03:30

Before God I swear this creed. My rifle and myself are the defenders of my country. We are the masters of our enemy. We are the saviors of my life. So be it, until victory is America's and there is no enemy, but Peace.

-USMC Rifleman's Creed

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I'm loading this "magic gun" and wondering to myself if these people have any idea why the hell I'm ( Read more... )

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sinfulstories June 27 2008, 09:50:00 UTC
Powerful and real instead of trite and poetic. I wish you'd write more. This was really very good, and you can feel the soldier resonate in it.

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isabelmichaels June 27 2008, 10:54:52 UTC
It's a fucked up pact they made back then, but damned if it wasn't seen through.

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passionsbounty June 27 2008, 19:12:05 UTC
*sigh* I miss him.

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nouslogos June 27 2008, 22:56:42 UTC
God damn it all the good characters getting killed.

Those of that are left miss you.

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neberu June 28 2008, 02:41:34 UTC
Nicely written, sir.

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