Comments | crimsonclad: fic: commuter lounge

crimsonclad

fic: commuter lounge

Nov 17, 2009 20:37

Dear internet, here is what happened: I wrote a story, and people replied to it, and we all talked about how awesome space is! Then I posted a sequel, and people replied, but I was on a trip, and then I got back and hadn't replied and started freaking out and kept procrastinating and then I was all "ohfuck I can never answer all these people I ( Read more... )

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ellie_i November 17 2009, 05:30:40 UTC

Last episode's Jeff/Annie hit me hard, like super hard. And now there is smoking hot fic that manages to include everything that makes it so smoking hot. Guh!

crimsonclad November 17 2009, 15:08:34 UTC

Yes, it was...unexpected. Ahem. I am glad not to be all alooooooooone in thinking so!

crackers4jenn November 17 2009, 08:07:05 UTC

GODDDDDDD (--assume that goes on for a really long while) this is amazing! Probably I am fanning myself a little too vigorously for 2am, but WHO CARES. And just when I thought it was going to be simply deliciously, well-written sexy times, wham! I am hit in the face with excellent dialogue and SWEETNESS.

THANK YOU. RE-READING RIGHT NOW.

crimsonclad November 17 2009, 15:29:17 UTC

Yay late night vigorous fanning! I am glad you enjoyed it. I feel a little weird about how much I enjoy it, at times, but OH WELL.

sumofparts November 17 2009, 23:10:21 UTC

Community is uber-awesome. Haven't read the fic yet but your intro stuff made me laugh. Also, hope you had fun on your trip and welcome back to LJ!

crimsonclad November 18 2009, 15:10:29 UTC

Thanks! I might leave sometimes, but I always come slinking back eventually.

I think you will appreciate my icon 0penhearts November 18 2009, 06:25:53 UTC

But his hands are on the smooth skin of her back, and Annie's gasps have a hint of her voice in them, the in and out of them on the verge of making a steady whine, a plea. He thinks he should maybe stop, knows he probably won't. Annie has a lot of tells, and none of them are saying anything about being unsure or nervous.

UM. YOU KIND OF SHORTED OUT MY BRAIN.

I just . . . give me a minute.

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Okay. You took my dear sweet lovely Jeff and Annie and made them BOTH all dirty and sexy (unGODLY SEXY) and I can't even handle it. And they're both still perfectly in character! DUDE. ANNIE SAID BLOWJOB. ANNIE WAS A SAUCY, SEDUCTIVE, KINKY LITTLE MINX AND IT WORKED.

I can't even . . . because . . . fuck.

Re: I think you will appreciate my icon crimsonclad November 18 2009, 15:12:26 UTC

Ahahaha, I am glad you liked it! (And Annie, I think she has a future in sauciness.)

Also, this reminds me that I've been wanting to write feedback for the one you wrote, so I will go do that RIGHT NOW.

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crimsonclad November 23 2009, 01:09:48 UTC

ty! Community itself provides many hijinx, but until they also offer the sexual kind, I suppose the internet will have to help them out!