Unexpected

Oct 30, 2011 23:30

An entry for LJ Idol, Season 8, week 2: "Three little words."

Brown paper envelopes with no return address were never good news. He'd learned that much from the TV shows. Too bad they hadn't been quite so clear on what you'd find inside them.

(Or so he thought. He wasn't always so good with details.)
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roina_arwen October 31 2011, 05:31:17 UTC
Revenge is a dish best served cold, LOL. Nice!

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crimsonplum November 1 2011, 01:54:57 UTC
Haha, thanks!

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crimsonplum November 1 2011, 01:55:15 UTC
Awesome! Glad it worked :)

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agirlnamedluna October 31 2011, 11:50:51 UTC
Oooh smart :) Liked the twist at the end!

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crimsonplum November 1 2011, 01:55:55 UTC
:) Thanks so much!

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imafarmgirl October 31 2011, 14:20:21 UTC
Nice twist at the end.

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crimsonplum November 1 2011, 01:56:12 UTC
Thanks!

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blythe025 October 31 2011, 17:44:04 UTC
Haha! Nice. I think they deserve each other. Heh.

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noodledays October 31 2011, 19:17:45 UTC
not sure anyone would deserve her. ;) I am thinking she deserves to get zilch beyond what she's already taken.

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blythe025 October 31 2011, 19:25:37 UTC
I don't think she deserves more money. However, he's not such a great guy either, since he didn't have any problem with cheating on her, which is why I think they deserve each other.

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noodledays October 31 2011, 19:28:30 UTC
I'm no fan of cheaters, but I'm even less a fan of money-grubbing blackmailers. ;o

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