Perigee

Dec 15, 2011 19:02

An entry for LJ Idol, season 8, week 8: "A traveling travesty." First in a series.

It wasn’t as hard as she’d thought it would be. Once she’d made some adjustments - brighter makeup, bigger jewelry, and of course shorter hemlines and higher heels - the rest was child’s play.

Well. Child’s play at home, not here. Here, children could barely speak ( Read more... )

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blythe025 December 16 2011, 17:26:57 UTC
Ooooh. Veeery interesting. I'm dying to know what happens. :)

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crimsonplum December 18 2011, 16:31:47 UTC
That's the idea. ;) Fingers crossed I can make the prompts work!

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lilycobalt December 16 2011, 21:47:13 UTC
I'm interested in where you're going with this!

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crimsonplum December 18 2011, 16:32:17 UTC
Glad to hear it! I'll do my best to please. :)

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zeitgeistic December 16 2011, 22:15:34 UTC
I have a feeling he's about to be eaten.

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crimsonplum December 18 2011, 16:36:48 UTC
Hmm, not quite... :)

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jem0000000 December 17 2011, 08:19:45 UTC
Uh-oh! Interesting, and well-written. :)

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crimsonplum December 18 2011, 16:37:00 UTC
Thanks!

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jem0000000 December 19 2011, 05:35:18 UTC
You're welcome. :)

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whipchick December 18 2011, 13:52:06 UTC
Lots of foreboding here - curious to see what will happen!

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crimsonplum December 18 2011, 16:37:26 UTC
I'll do my best for a good payoff!

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