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Jan 23, 2012 19:23


An entry for LJ Idol, season 8, week 11: open topic. Stand-alone fiction. For dialect clarification, click here after reading.

"...oh, aye. Sometimes the fourth parrot has to flap his wings to stay on."

From her vantage point off to stage left, Shannon laughed softly as Alex played a rim shot and the crowd roared. That joke never failed, even with ( Read more... )

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lawchicky January 24 2012, 03:48:30 UTC
Awwwww- my heart just melted a little for the both of them. Loved this!

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crimsonplum January 25 2012, 03:23:43 UTC
Thanks, sweetie! My work here is done. :)

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yuniebaby January 24 2012, 03:55:57 UTC
This is such a wonderful read! Really excellent from start to finish.

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crimsonplum January 25 2012, 03:24:12 UTC
So glad you liked it - thank you!

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crimsonplum January 25 2012, 03:24:40 UTC
Thank you! I love them too. :)

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roina_arwen January 24 2012, 05:26:37 UTC
Mmmm... I've always loved a man with a brogue! Well done, great characters, A+ !

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crimsonplum January 25 2012, 03:25:57 UTC
LOL, me too! But remember: it's only a faire brogue...real accent is Texas Gulf Coast. ;) So glad you liked it.

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jem0000000 January 24 2012, 06:01:44 UTC
How sweet! The characters are wonderful, and I loved the humor scattered through the story. :)

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crimsonplum January 25 2012, 03:27:00 UTC
Thank you! As they said in Steel Magnolias: Laughter through tears is my favorite emotion. :)

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jem0000000 January 27 2012, 18:41:41 UTC
You're welcome. :)

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