What happened today

[crimsonplum]

An entry for LJ Idol, week 13. Fiction based on this news story from the Houston area: http://www.click2houston.com/news/Police-Girl-fights-man-who-tried-to-kidnap-her/-/1735978/8502504/-/t9kyqn/-/index ( Read more... )

Comments

Great story!

[sikander7]

I loved it and it had me tense to the end.

Re: Great story!

[crimsonplum]

Thank you!

[alien_infinity]

I'm glad the girl managed to get away. This was a well-written story! :)

[crimsonplum]

So am I. That had to be one tough little lady! :) Thanks!

[lawchicky]

Oh, nice story!

[crimsonplum]

Thanks hon!

[n3m3sis42]

This was really good! You captured a child's perspective so well.

[crimsonplum]

Thank you! Getting the age group right was a challenge, so I'm glad it worked. :)

[roina_arwen]

Well written, very evocative!

[crimsonplum]

Thank you!