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Feb 12, 2012 23:47

An entry for LJ Idol, season 8, week 14: "Twitterpated." Not the least bit fiction.

There are some things you've been sure of since the beginning, since the exact moment it happened. Since the moment that tall, lanky frame ambled down the hall toward you and your linoleum-floored broom closet of an office. Since the moment you heard that sharp-edged ( Read more... )

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comedychick February 13 2012, 06:16:24 UTC
So bittersweet. Really enjoyed this, though. I could even relate to some of it, so it kinda struck a chord with me.

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crimsonplum February 14 2012, 03:25:58 UTC
Thank you, dear. Funny how when it lives mostly in your head, it feels like you're the only one...and when you tell it, you find you're not alone after all.

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comedychick February 14 2012, 03:28:31 UTC
*nod* Yes indeed.

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basric February 13 2012, 07:53:33 UTC
I agree with comedychick its bittersweet. Beautifully written.

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crimsonplum February 14 2012, 03:27:42 UTC
Thank you. I can usually focus on the sweet, at least. :)

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seabird78 February 13 2012, 15:00:29 UTC
Wow. This is something I know and understand all too well.

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crimsonplum February 14 2012, 03:30:22 UTC
I'm sorry for that...I do hope your situation has given you some happiness, too. <3

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seabird78 February 15 2012, 19:49:31 UTC
Thanks! It definitely has given me some happiness.

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jacq22 February 13 2012, 22:10:45 UTC
Just stunning, and beautifully written. The longing, the wanting, and yet reality coming between you. Love is never easy, there is not just one script, one story,.... but many.

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crimsonplum February 14 2012, 03:32:27 UTC
Thank you...so true.

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myrna_bird February 13 2012, 22:52:04 UTC
Lovely, just lovely.

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crimsonplum February 14 2012, 03:32:39 UTC
Thank you. <3

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