Amazement

Mar 31, 2014 18:23

Oh, beautiful girl. So precious. So foolish. Had no one ever told you to be careful what you wish for?

Allow me to answer that for you: Of course they did. I know, because I was listening. Listening to everything, while you hear only your own voice, twisting everything out of shape. You ask for much, and when you receive it, you decide it isn't ( Read more... )

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jem0000000 April 1 2014, 07:08:11 UTC
Creeeepy! It makes me think of fairies, trying to steal a human away to another world. :)

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crimsonplum April 2 2014, 02:39:44 UTC
That's essentially the gist of it. :)

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kristalsawesome April 1 2014, 20:32:20 UTC
Channeling David Bowie? Nice to see it from purely his perspective, without the distraction of hers - so you can put your own thoughts etc in.

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crimsonplum April 2 2014, 02:45:41 UTC
Ah, you noticed! I wanted to explore what the movie only hinted at - he was sinister and ruthless, but Sarah wasn't the heroine she wanted to think she was, either. Hope you enjoyed it!

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halfshellvenus April 1 2014, 20:39:16 UTC
There's a certain "out of the frying pan, into the fire" sense here. Whatever the young woman thought she was escaping, this seems to be worse.

Giving up all control to someone else in exchange "for everything you could want" is incredibly dangerous. Your wants and needs then become subject to someone else's whim and definition, and what if finally the only thing you truly want is to be free?

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crimsonplum April 2 2014, 03:03:44 UTC
Oh, you're absolutely right. This is based on a dark fairy tale, but I really wanted to show that there's more to each side than just good and evil - there's a lot of gray area. She also needed to realize that her actions had consequences; she was lucky enough to get a break this time, and next time, her luck could run out.

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suesniffsglue April 2 2014, 03:14:27 UTC
Yes!! I get this, and I love it. Wonderful :D

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crimsonplum April 2 2014, 04:56:02 UTC
Huzzah, another fan! :) So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

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crimsonplum April 2 2014, 13:07:21 UTC
Most excellent - that was the idea! Thanks :)

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