One-shot: Dragon tale

Jul 07, 2013 15:07

Title: Dragon tale
Author: phoenix_zeal
Pairing: Akame
Rating: G
Genre: Fantasy
Disclaimer: I do not make any profit from this.
Beta: Me, Myself and I
Word count: 5246
Summary: There, amongst the aubergines, sat the unlikeliest creature he could have ever imagined: a dragon the size of a very large dog with black scales that shimmered in the sunlight.
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mae0513 July 8 2013, 12:14:25 UTC
Love it!

thanks for sharing~

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phoenix_zeal July 8 2013, 17:20:08 UTC
Thank you! :D

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kaze_no_hisui July 8 2013, 12:24:23 UTC
this's so sweet and jin as a dragon is so cute ^////^ although it's so sad to see kazuya waiting for jin to come back but guess it's worth it because jin does come back and he is in human form so they can live happily \^o^/

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phoenix_zeal July 8 2013, 17:22:10 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, I tried to make it as not angsty as possible but it was impossible to make it a happy ever after without a little bit of angst before. ^^; I'm sorry. But I'm glad you liked it! :D

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phoenix_zeal July 8 2013, 17:26:59 UTC
Oh wow, really? I haven't really read any Akame fics for years so maybe that's why you could read this: I'm still an "old school" Akame writer. XD I wrote my first fic six years ago I believe. Time flies. :P I'm very flattered that you count my Akame fics amongst the best. :)

This is probably definitely my last Akame fic, but I said that about my previous story too. XD (Sorry for the overload of emoticons and rambling, I just came back from a very long and tiring day so I'm kind of out of it.)

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purikazu July 9 2013, 03:26:50 UTC
uwahh~
Glad to see u again, zeal-san..
Okaerinasai~

Really, im very happy to know that u appeared with a story..
Especially, a short, sweet, yet beautiful story..

Oh, my..
Your words never stop to amaze me..
I like ur way in describing kazuya's life..
It's simple and easy to understand..
There is not much dialogues between jin and kazu, right?
It makes me feel like i live among them..

what a wonderful fairytale..

And it has a happy ending, yeaayy..
I wish them to live happily ever after..

Yosh, goodluck with your RL. And thanks for sharing~

Matta ne..
^_^//

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phoenix_zeal July 9 2013, 05:31:52 UTC
Thank you!

Honestly I thought that it would be impossible for me to write Akame again, but apparently I was wrong. It was requested of me and then somehow the inspiration for this fairytale appeared. I think it contains a lot of my old feelings about Akame so I'm kind of proud of it. It's not too rushed or emotionless like I was worried it would be I think.

I'm glad that you like the way I write. :D I've never liked using too big words or long, complicated descriptions. I want it to be just enough to give you some idea of what the place looks like, and to make you understand what the characters are feeling.

Thank you so much again! <3

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