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gerlonso February 1 2012, 06:32:52 UTC
lol omg I loved David and Fernando fighting. It was fun to see them acting like classic brothers!

Iker :( Guy needs a hug and a vacation lol

Again, something tugs at Fernando, like a puzzle piece he can’t place. He’s reminded of Iker for no particular reason, of how late he always stays, of how much he takes care of David. David would be a mess without Iker and they all know it.

“You have Iker,” Fernando says with a smile. And it feels right, for some reason.

“Wouldn’t that be something?” David asks with a wry smile. “If I could marry Iker.”

I love it too much!! The whole conversation between the two of them post-fight, really. It's so perfect ♥ Tuggin' on my heartstrings.

“Who’s Xabi-”
Just the most beautiful man in the world, Fernando. NBD.

Oh, Fernando. Not meaning to, but totally fucking with Sergio and his feelings. They're both in such a difficult situation, it's so sad.

She knows him better than anyone else in the entire world. So Olalla doesn’t catch him, per se. But when Fernando comes running, upset, face flushed, ( ... )

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crinklefries February 29 2012, 17:27:01 UTC
Ahhhhh thank you for this lovely comment! There are so many triangles going on in this story it's a wonder everyone in it hasn't imploded from heartbreak yet. 8(

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! I'm so glad you're still enjoying it ♥

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difusion February 1 2012, 14:19:16 UTC
ooh, ooh, ooh. heart is in two.

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crinklefries February 29 2012, 17:27:26 UTC
Yours and Fernando's both :( ♥

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darkensunrise February 1 2012, 14:19:27 UTC
:((((((((((((

UGH SERGIO AND FERNANDO WILL NEVER NOT MAKE ME SAD. That entire phone conversation was so incredibly heartbreaking, poor Fernando! And finally something with Iker and David - poor David can't admit how much he really loves Iker.

I loved this a lot :)

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crinklefries February 29 2012, 17:28:30 UTC
FERNANDO'S LIFE IS THE WORST. Both irl and in this fic. Que tipico.

Thank yoooooooou sweets :3 ♥

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mirano_100809 February 1 2012, 15:13:42 UTC
okay, so where am I when this fic started? *slap myself* This fic is soooo wonderful!

I love the dynamic of relationship between Sergio and Nando...it seemed so strong, but so fragile at the same time. Sergio had the right to be angry to Nando for intending to marry Olalla...Fernando was the love of his life anyway! Come on Nando, you have to realize that you and Sergio are meant to be together!

David and Iker...well, David seemed to not realize about his feelings towards Iker, or what?

And Bojan! What's he going to do next?

Again, this is such a brilliant piece of writing. Can't wait for the next part :)

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crinklefries February 29 2012, 17:29:38 UTC
Ahhhh thank you so so much! I loved reading your comment (even if it was a month ago shhhhh). There's definitely more to come, I hope I keep you engaged and reading!! ♥

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sashay_away February 1 2012, 16:43:24 UTC
heart be aching in places, woman.

but it could have been so romantic/hopeful with olalla and nando at the end if nando weren't a prince whyyy. and also iker. and david. Iker needs a break. also what kind of person says "who's Xabi?" in the middle of a goddamn fight. what the hell, nando.

GREAT STORY.

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crinklefries February 29 2012, 17:30:40 UTC
I'm sorry!! Everyone in every fic is sad istg 8(

LMFAO poor Fernando, can't even ask the right questions in the middle of fights smh this is why his life sucks.

Thank you so much for reading & commenting!! ♥

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