LJ Idol Week 42: Flies

Mar 17, 2015 20:35

What follows is the best account I can give of the last three times I saw my brother.

The third-to-last time, it was mid-August, and he rang my doorbell. I can still remember what he looked like when I answered. A mirage with the heat-lines from the road all around him.

I said, “Jesus,” and he smiled.

Back then -there are years and years in ( Read more... )

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medleymisty March 18 2015, 03:03:12 UTC
Beautiful and wonderful and all that is good, yes. :)

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crisp_sobriety March 19 2015, 20:16:18 UTC
:3 Like I said, I'm always happy when you like my entries. Thank you!

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roina_arwen March 18 2015, 04:54:02 UTC
Wow, very creative and ingenious!

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crisp_sobriety March 19 2015, 20:10:35 UTC
Thank you!

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halfshellvenus March 18 2015, 06:25:49 UTC
Such a fascinating story-- all the supernatural elements aside (the brother really was one heck of a 'doctor'), these twins who do not always get along and yet have such a strong connection that they also cannot entirely leave each other were an interesting microcosm of sacrifice and devotion.

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crisp_sobriety March 19 2015, 22:45:27 UTC
The twins themselves are what interested me most in the story, yeah. :3

Thank you!

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gratefuladdict March 18 2015, 06:52:41 UTC
This was amazing.

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crisp_sobriety March 19 2015, 20:11:17 UTC
Aw, thank you! :3

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reckless_blues March 18 2015, 09:12:56 UTC
Oh God, it's the guy in my icon ( ... )

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crisp_sobriety March 19 2015, 23:13:54 UTC
Danyul. :3

"I've always thought that people say "Life is meaningful because it ends! Time is short! Make the most of it!" and so on just do it as a defense mechanism against mortality and none of that structure is at all necessary. But they do have a point that human philosophy, human drives, and so on, are going to change radically in response to all this ...So I'm attracted to stories with this sort of metaphor."Same. It's an interesting topic to me as well, which is probably why immortality is something that has come up so much in my entries ( ... )

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