Open Your Eyes Chapter Fourteen

Aug 02, 2009 20:04

Title: Open Your Eyes (14/?)
Author: Cristofle (Liz)
Characters: Harry/Hermione primarily. Harry, Hermione, and Ron will appear significantly, but this is ensemble friendly, including just about everyone. The Weasley family, Kingsley, Angelina Johnson, Teddy Lupin, Neville, Luna, the Patil twins, and Dean will definitely appear in more than passing ( Read more... )

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eatyorgreens August 3 2009, 01:59:32 UTC
Thanks for posting, Liz! Another great chapter ( ... )

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cristofle August 3 2009, 18:24:47 UTC
Thanks, Chris! Glad you enjoyed the chapter:) I was a little nervous about the break-up. I wanted it be instigated by Ron since I'd indicated that, but not make it ALL his fault. Glad that came across.

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melissa_35 August 3 2009, 04:55:24 UTC
I have a brilliant idea. You should update OYE everyday. Yep. You should. Hee.

But seriously, thanks for being awesome and writing this fic. And I absolutely love how you have captured the characters. Sure, I love HHr, but the RHr relationship is SO important. I never bought them, nor will ever buy them, as a wonderful couple, but I can't deny how integral their friendship is to Harry. The trio is perfection, and Harry needs both Ron and Hermione. Not just Hermione (which is what most HHr shippers think, and that annoyyyyyys)

Also, while I LOVED this chapter and the flashbacks, I want more Harry/Hermione snogging. Heh.

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cristofle August 3 2009, 18:25:19 UTC
LOL, that would turn me into a MASTER procrastinator!

And wait for the next chapter;)

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melissa_35 August 3 2009, 22:24:30 UTC
Ahhhh! Post it tonight! Pleeeeeeeeeeeease. I'll give you...a kitten. True story.

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cristofle August 3 2009, 23:55:13 UTC
I have six cats and five kittens I'm trying to rescue, lol. Any other offers?;)

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jjm_7 August 3 2009, 05:41:36 UTC
Hey, Liz. My mind is kinda preoccupied with RL issues atm, so I can't read your fic tonight, but I promise, I PROMISE I'll read and comment tomorrow. :pinkie_swear:

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cristofle August 3 2009, 18:25:35 UTC
No worries!:)

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jjm_7 August 4 2009, 02:37:33 UTC
1. I want a Harry. He's so perfect and...GUH. I LOVE HIM.

2. Very realistic fight between Ron and Hermione. I didn't expect you to use Fred's death as a detonator, but it was BRILLIANT. Ron has never been able to control his feelings, EVER. He's always been so hurtful, so I totally bought his horrible behavior towards Hermione and MyHarry.

3. Nobody loves me. I have no one. :( :( :(

4. Harry being there for Hermione, again, totally true to the books and the way their relationship has always been portrayed. Harry is so sweet and considerate to her, and I think that you understand something about HHr and RHr that is very, very important: Hermione always talks about Harry with so much admiration, (for example, this line: He’s always been better at Defense Against The Dark Arts, though, no wonder he’s not worried, I know for a fact his Patronus charm is stronger than mine...), and Ron has always felt inferior to Harry in the eyes of Hermione. And maybe it was just a coincidence, but that line, imo, caused Ron to snap at Hermione in ( ... )

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cristofle August 4 2009, 21:00:17 UTC
I definitely think Harry is a sore spot for Ron even though he's his best friend- he's convinced everyone sees him as inferior and it tends to be a trigger point for him. And Ron can get nasty when he's at his lowest- I just can't see him at 19/20 having a mature break up at first, lol. I think eventually he'd calm down, but he reacts in the heat of the moment.

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