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cristofle

Open Your Eyes Chapter Sixteen

Aug 18, 2009 22:51

Title: Open Your Eyes (16/?)
Author: Cristofle (Liz)
Characters: Harry/Hermione primarily. Harry, Hermione, and Ron will appear significantly, but this is ensemble friendly, including just about everyone. The Weasley family, Kingsley, Angelina Johnson, Teddy Lupin, Neville, Luna, the Patil twins, and Dean will definitely appear in more than passing ( Read more... )

harry potter fic, open your eyes, harry potter, fanfic

Comments 5

eatyorgreens August 19 2009, 03:31:01 UTC

WHAT? DRACO MALFOY!?!?! Can't wait to see where that goes ( ... )

cristofle August 19 2009, 19:34:17 UTC

Yeah, when I was thinking about writing this, I was thinking about Ron, and given the Horcrux hallucination and the way he's ALWAYS been about perceiving Harry to one-up him, I just couldn't picture him brushing it off in my head. I don't think a couple sentences accurately dealt with that rift between Harry and Ron, that to some extent had been there for years.

jjm_7 August 19 2009, 04:05:11 UTC

Holy shit. MALFOY!!!! What does he want??? Is it about Gabriel??! So many questions!

Okay, that was probably my favorite chapter, mainly because it delivered the infamous "talk" that we all waited for, between Ron and Harry. And it was AMAZING. YOU are amazing. The way you "dissected" the whole situation, so many issues that were brought up, it seriously, I'm 100% not messing with you, it BLEW MY MIND. I did not expect that. I did not expect Ron to be so upset. I mean, I KNEW he'd be upset, but that was beyond angsty. Especially cause I do love Harry/Ron. And this situation truly is complicated, to say the least.

Also, I'm glad you didn't resolve it. I'm glad there's still more to come. I'm guessing we'll also have a Ron/Hermione confrontation?

Last but not least, I LOVED Harry/Hermione throughout the whole chapter. Especially when Harry told her he was in love with her. GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I died, seriously.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

cristofle August 19 2009, 19:35:46 UTC

Yes, Ron and Hermione will throw down about this, and that interaction will be decidedly different, lol. Their relationship hasn't been as consistent as Harry and Ron, it's a different dynamic.

misplacedmoony October 24 2009, 20:38:28 UTC

I started reading this story ages and ages ago and only just rediscovered it last night. And reread it all in one sitting. I think you've set up a very interesting situation here all while staying very true to the characters and relationships. I really hope you continue it. I mean, you kind of left us at a cliffhanger here XD