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P033: all the pieces of the break evaporate

Sep 27, 2016 17:04

From: untitledminds

Title: all the pieces of the break evaporate
Prompt Code: P033
Rating: PG-13
Side pairing/s: minor!Sehun/Lu Han
Length: 6787 words
Summary: Dealing with fourteen barking dogs who like to poop is the least of Jongdae’s concerns.

Notes: i have to apologise if some parts seem rushed bc i didn’t have time to let it flourish and develop on its ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

j2ster September 28 2016, 09:49:28 UTC

WHAT A CUTE WELL-WRITTEN FIC CAN I HUG YOU AND THIS FIC FOREVER

OKAY FIRST OF ALL JD SINGING AND ESSENTIALLY SERENADING JUNMYEON WITH EVERY TIME i shrieked

jongdae never failing to reply to sehun with curt answers like he's talking to a pet dog. all the jongdae-sehun interaction is gold. the chanyeol and baekhyun cameo is brilliant. this whole thing is brilliant. all the events were well thought out and nothing felt out of place or awkward at all.

the suchen!!!!!!!!!!!!! cutest of all the cutest of all the cutest!!!!! the moment they met at the floristry for the second time i just knew that junmyeon was going to buy flowers for jongdae!! and!!!!! i couldn't stop smiling until the end of the fic. just utterly adorable.

thank you so much for writing this c:

untitledminds October 5 2016, 05:40:56 UTC

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! YES HUG MEEEEE //sends online hugs

gah thank you i had so much fun with this and playing with all the characters and cameos it was such a challenge but it was honestly just so much fun and all the dialogue and stuff was like !!!

AHH it took me ages to think of that at the end bc i was like !!! idk how to end it and then it HIT ME the junmyeon buying him flowers and i was for real screamed bc it tied evreything up

thank you so much for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment xxx

anonlock September 30 2016, 01:29:32 UTC

I'm so delighted. I didn't think anyone would choose my prompt. I didn't think anyone would fulfil the candy points either, it seemed a bit crazy even to me lol I was obviously wrong and even more than that but I got to read an adorable fic like this <3 ( ... )

untitledminds October 5 2016, 05:44:22 UTC

aw!! your prompt was absolutely adorable and at first i didn't id be able to fulfil the candy points either but hard ! work ! pays ! off! (i was worried it would seem too excessive hahaha)

gah thank you so much i'm so glad you're satisfied with it!! i was worried that it would be too short and everything would be too rushed but im glad that you found it progressed smoothly! thank you thank you thank you for liking my characterisation that the relationships bc it's smthing rly important to me and obviously writing the characters were just so much fun and i was worried i wouldn't be able to show junmyeon's feelings properly since it was written from jongdae's pov but im happy that you like it!

comedy is imo rly hard to pull off and smthing im constantly trying to do so thank you for saying that :)))

i'm rly glad that you prompted this and read this and enjoyed it! thank you for your warm comments they really really mean a lot! <3