Comments | critterel: "Nature Walk" - SS/LM (Yup they are both boys so... Slash warning)

critterel

"Nature Walk" - SS/LM (Yup they are both boys so... Slash warning)

Jun 27, 2009 05:32

Title: Nature Walk ( Read more... )

severus/lucius, ficlet, harry potter, ss/lm

Comments 12

princessbloomy June 27 2009, 17:25:58 UTC

Looove itt!!! &hearts
I loved Lucius disliking the nature bits, very amusing :D

critterel June 27 2009, 18:18:12 UTC

Thank you! Someone had mentioned Lucius as part of a group 'walking in the woods' and it just struck me as funny... I couldn't see him doing that. From there the mind just traveled...

Thanks for the comment! This is my first ficlet so I was nervous.

Clare

shiv5468 June 27 2009, 17:28:21 UTC

Definitely a sturdy tree.

critterel June 27 2009, 18:19:29 UTC

Of course... a good Slytherin would be seeking out the best way to work the situation to his advantage...

C

luciusmistress June 27 2009, 17:56:58 UTC

AWWW!!! That was just beautiful! The love between them... Oh my!

And I can totally picture Lucius trampling after Severus, getting more bored and irritated by the second :) And Severus' answers to his unspoken complaints were spot on!

You HAVE to write more of this pairing! A lot more!

critterel June 27 2009, 18:23:59 UTC

I love your icon!

Thanks for the comment. I think SS/LM is a really perfect match. (Plus they just crack me up. I can hear them complaining at each other good naturedly.)

This is my first ficlet and I'm so proud that all of you have liked it... it feels weird but very nice when people whose writing you like like something of yours.

I tend to imagine little vignettes with these two. I'm still very shy to write anything explicit but I think the right mood between these two is very sexy and hot. But of course that is with my mind visualizing them there... and they are both so hot.

Clare

ms_anthrophy June 29 2009, 05:29:47 UTC

Very beautiful. I love your imagery and the tension between them. Characterization works well, too. (I have a feeling that Lucius will bite back somehow;))

Let's just say: keep up the good work!

critterel August 2 2010, 00:30:39 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! I love your stories, so to have you say nice things about mine is a thrill.

Thanks so much!

Clare

dreamy_dragon73 November 1 2009, 12:45:53 UTC

This is sweet. I can picture Lucius complaining all the way through the forest and Severus silently smirking about it. Good thing there were champagne and chocolate-covered strawberries to soothe him. :)

critterel August 2 2010, 00:32:06 UTC

*smirk* Yes, I think that Severus would figure out if he's going to torment Lucius that there *must* be rewards involved. lol.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you liked it.

Clare