Comments | critterel: Fic: The Changing of the Guard

critterel

Fic: The Changing of the Guard

Jun 14, 2010 02:22

I wrote this story for the Severus Sighs email/Insane Journal group. I'm actually quite happy with it. Many thanks to atypicalsnowman for putting lots of time and effort into betaing a tiny story for me. I'm not sure why I like this so much but I think this says a lot about how I feel what Lucius and Severus' relationship is like whether they ( Read more... )

draco malfoy, harry potter, pairing:snarry, slash, severus snape, lucius malfoy

Comments 6

dreamy_dragon73 June 14 2010, 22:11:07 UTC

This is very sweet. Severus is such a romantic, but what I loved best is his friendship with Lucius and the way Lucius really cares about him.

half_vulcan June 16 2010, 01:00:04 UTC

critterel June 16 2010, 03:32:45 UTC

Thanks so much! I was quite nervous about posting this. Not sure why since it seems very few people have read it. Oh well, I should know better by now. I don't write that often, I really need to get over this feeling that the entire world is just waiting with baited breath for me to post something. lol.

Thanks again for taking the time to come over here and read this! It's the one I'm most proud of so far. : )

half_vulcan June 16 2010, 03:40:05 UTC

delphipsmith July 21 2010, 02:49:44 UTC

The elf looked the Potions Master up and down. "Is Master Lucius being sure that Master Severus is not being needing Fire Whiskey? Or perhaps a potion? Master Severus is looking like he is needing a good shot of Fire Whiskey."

LOL! Great line :) But this one is my favorite:

...Lucius' theory that Gryffindor's-much like their Lion standard- were short on technique but made up for it with cheeky nerve, a desire to please, and a willingness to try anything once

Very nice!

critterel July 21 2010, 04:46:45 UTC

*blushes* Thanks so much! I loved your work so I am very honored that you read what I wrote!

Most of what I write is actually either on my IJ account (username of Magialuna) or in the Severus Sighs IJ account and I need to move it. I only really started to write at the urging of the moderators of the list. They are very supportive. I just always forget to crosspost it. lol. And sometimes, like my most recent story, it wouldn't make a lot of sense since it contained some list members names.

Anyway, If you are on IJ, please feel free to friend me there as well. I will try to get my journal here up to snuff. I actually kept most of my more explicit slash off of here because of a few specific friends I had but I actually don't have them friended anymore...so I guess I ought to just start cross posting it.

Again, thanks so much for reading my stuff and sorry for the TMI reply lol.
Clare