It's LOVELY. You do so much here - the setting is wonderful, the sense of brewing tension and the little interaction with Lucius and the growing relationship (and, uh, other growing things :) ). Hot, sexy, snappy and gorgeous - Draco is beautifully characterized and I sympathize TERRIBLY with Harry.
And Patrice? LOVE. *hugs* Thank you so much!!!
PS Maybe unlock if you want me to link people to it? (If you don't that's okay too, but I'd like to put it in the roundup to the house party :D)
I unlocked. : ) Will probably relock after awhile. I get nervous reading all the problems some people have had with explict stuff in their journals...I forgot it had been linked though. That is a good point.
Thanks so much for the wonderful comments! *blushes* I am really new at this and really aspire to be nearly as good as you someday. I think maybe there are stages to it. (At least for the less natural writers among us.)
I was reading Alisanne's journal the other day and I realized you and she are quite explicit and very intimate without using as many shocking words as most porn type writers...I need to think about that more when I am writing. I think somehow I think I have to use naughty words when I really don't.
Anyway, thanks for the lovely comment. As usual your writing is providing me inspiration to grow... even while I'm reading other stuff! lol
Thank you so much! Gosh I feel like a fangirl who is getting superstar autographs in my journal!! I love your writing and you came and read my little thing...*squee*
Thank you for reading and commenting! I think Draco always has a very logical mind, especially when it comes to convincing others to see things his way.
I love your work and am very excited to have you read something I wrote!
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What a great and hot story! Yay for Drarry! :)
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Thanks so much!
Clare
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For me??????? THANK YOU!
It's LOVELY. You do so much here - the setting is wonderful, the sense of brewing tension and the little interaction with Lucius and the growing relationship (and, uh, other growing things :) ). Hot, sexy, snappy and gorgeous - Draco is beautifully characterized and I sympathize TERRIBLY with Harry.
And Patrice? LOVE. *hugs* Thank you so much!!!
PS Maybe unlock if you want me to link people to it? (If you don't that's okay too, but I'd like to put it in the roundup to the house party :D)
(ED Ugh. Tag problem. Sorry about the italics)
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Thanks so much for the wonderful comments! *blushes* I am really new at this and really aspire to be nearly as good as you someday. I think maybe there are stages to it. (At least for the less natural writers among us.)
I was reading Alisanne's journal the other day and I realized you and she are quite explicit and very intimate without using as many shocking words as most porn type writers...I need to think about that more when I am writing. I think somehow I think I have to use naughty words when I really don't.
Anyway, thanks for the lovely comment. As usual your writing is providing me inspiration to grow... even while I'm reading other stuff! lol
Clare
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Thanks so much!
Clare
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Draco has some good, sound logic with that blow job theory of his. :D
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I love your work and am very excited to have you read something I wrote!
Clare
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*squishes you*
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