HCM

[crm_114]

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Comments

[xeero]

I like most of it. I think 'lame as fuck' should be changed to something else.

I would like Chorus 1 & 2 to have different words. Similar, but different. I would not like to mention 'the scene', at least in the context it's in it seems geared towards punx scene. If you changed it a bit to be like 'scene of a crime' etc, then that'd be cool.

I like what you have going though.

[crm_114]

I think once you hear it, you might change your thoughts on the whole "lame as fuck" situation.

A lot of owrds can go into Chorus.

Thank you.