hp fic // i built this kingdom up from nothing [remus/sirius, pg-13]

Sep 09, 2008 01:25

title: I built this kingdom up from nothing
author: crooked
pairing: Remus/Sirius
rating: PG-13
word count: 2730
summary: Living on his own has one benefit Sirius didn't expect.
disclaimer: Not mine.
a/n: written for round two of the rs_games. big thanks and ♥ to my lovely beta, such_heights!

It’s a right mess but it’s his mess, and Sirius actually takes pride in it. )

remus/sirius, fics, rs_games, hp fic

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brighty18 September 9 2008, 17:31:30 UTC
Now that I am allowed to say it, I can let you know how much I enjoyed this. Damn, but I can relate to how Sirius felt with his own place. You capture that feeling so extraordinarily well: freedom, fear, a bit of alienation, plus insomnia! But then there is the good part: an uninhibited Remus!

Very well done!

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crooked September 12 2008, 07:17:55 UTC
thank you so much! i'm so so glad that it seems i captured that scary-and-yet-exhilarating feeling of striking out on one's own. and, well, uninhibited!Remus is always a welcomed sight. ;)

thanks again, and thank you for the hard work you and the other mods put into the games! it was awesome and tons of fun ♥

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brighty18 September 12 2008, 13:40:32 UTC
I loved that feeling, actually!!

And, THANK YOU!! That means a lot! It was all supposed to be fun!

BTW, I LOVE your icon. I've always found the whole World Wildlife Foundation vs. World Wrestling Federation hilarious.

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laroseminuit September 9 2008, 20:36:19 UTC
I'd give my right arm to be Mrs. Potter's scandalized doilies.
Yay for Remus the insatiable trollop.
Nice fic.

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crooked September 12 2008, 07:21:39 UTC
i'm right there with you on the doilies thing, seriously. XD and i can never really resist insatiable trollop-ing up at least one of the boys! thanks very much! glad you liked it <33

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moonypads September 10 2008, 05:22:08 UTC
Oh I remember reading this for R/S games, lovely! I loved it then and love it now! The doilies are hilarious, poor Sirius!

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crooked September 12 2008, 07:26:39 UTC
thank you, hon! ♥ poor Sirius, indeed. terribly awkward to get off with your boyfriend while a constant reminder of your surrogate mother is right there.

somehow, however, he powered through it. ;)

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carmine_ink September 11 2008, 04:35:49 UTC
This is such a lovely little fic. As someone who has also just moved into a new place, I particularly enjoyed reading Sirius' thoughts about the joys of living alone. ;p

Also - so much love for the last line! :D

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crooked September 12 2008, 07:27:41 UTC
hee thank you, sweetie! i'm really glad you liked it and could relate to it! ahaha i must admit that the last line is probably my favorite as well ;P

<33

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sleeper6 September 15 2008, 03:57:47 UTC
Yes! Sirius and his hair--oh, I love that bit with him fixing his hair--for Remus. *squeals*

Lovely fic; they're so perfect together, and you showed this perfectly here.

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crooked September 17 2008, 01:42:16 UTC
hee! i'm glad you liked that little detail about Sirius fussing over his hair. XD

and thank you, darling! i'm so happy you enjoyed it ♥

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