Comments | crooked: hp fic // the best part of waking up [remus/sirius; r.]

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hp fic // the best part of waking up [remus/sirius; r.]

Jan 08, 2009 22:17

title: the best part of waking up
author: crooked
pairing: Remus/Sirius
rating: R
word count: 1495
summary: Remus Lupin doesn’t cry over spilt coffee; he gets even.
disclaimer: not mine.
a/n: inspired by this lovely piece of art by nk_aoede. ♥

( Remus doesn't even see it coming, mostly because Sirius appears to be in a semi-comatose state. )

remus/sirius, fics, hp fic

Comments 57

westwardlee January 9 2009, 12:30:59 UTC

I haven't read much R/S lately, but I love this one. Sirius is perfectly Sirius here, and Remus's revenge is awesome.

*wants to send them another mug...has plenty of chipped ones they could use*

crooked January 11 2009, 04:57:35 UTC

thank you! you know, if it's not on my flist i don't really read much R/S [or fic in general] these days either. i'm glad you enjoyed this one! Sirius is such a little shit, isn't he? but Remus wasn't a Marauder for nothing ;)

♥

mysecretashes January 9 2009, 14:10:12 UTC

This is brilliant! So funny, and a perfect complement to Aoede's art. And I really, really love Remus's revenge. :D

crooked January 11 2009, 04:58:10 UTC

thanks very much! i was hoping to do Aoede's lovely art justice, so i'm very glad you liked it! :)

myworldmytrue January 9 2009, 14:38:27 UTC

aaaaaaggghhhhhhh. gurgle. gaaaah.

So yeah, nk_aoede's art is completely amazing. And then someone else comes along and turns a brilliant picture into an outstanding fic.

Oh, so funny and so SO smexy.

I think I might be in love with you. This one saved my morning/day/week. ♥

crooked January 11 2009, 04:59:00 UTC

thanks so much! XD i'm so very thrilled that you enjoyed this ♥

adrian_the_dork January 9 2009, 14:47:43 UTC

I love how affectionate and domestic and just beautifully casual this was. (pretty damn hot as well, might I add)
Ordinarily I would have thought that toast and table sex just dont work, but you wrote it wonderfully. :)

Loved the coffee revenge at the end as well.

crooked January 11 2009, 05:02:23 UTC

thanks very much! i really have to credit the toast and sex to Aoede's art, but i'm glad you thought i translated it well into the fic <33

spacefragments January 9 2009, 15:27:12 UTC

OMG, WHAT

YOU'VE JUST MADE MY DAY, I HOPE YOU REALIZE. HOLY SHSJRNGVAJGK (thst sounds vaguely viking-ish doesn't it) ANYWAY, FLAIL!! smug!sirius! vengeful!remus! FTW!! you, you just got the mood of that damn drawing PERFECTLY. it all happened almost exactly the way i imagined it happening! i love how it's just, like, a "slice-of-life" kinda thing, so domestic and hot and snarky and LOVELY. omg. i'll take that cold shower, i think.

crooked January 11 2009, 05:05:37 UTC

asfdjh ♥!! I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT! i was really, really hoping that i didn't mess up the whole feel of the artwork when i wrote it into a fic, so it makes me all *flail*-y that you think i got it perfect. :D :D i have to thank you again for drawing the LOVELY art in the first place. it was totally the best muse to work with <3333