if you're still bleeding; suits

[veils]

if you're still bleeding
New York is Harvey Specter’s town, but Donna’s the one who really knows how to run it.
harvey/donna; pg-13, ~3600 words. spoilers for basically the whole series to date

Comments

[enemeriad]

this was really really REALLY wonderful. it was so sweet and in character and i just loved every minute of it. especially this: You can find out secrets by kissing Donna. That she moans when he takes her bottom lip in his mouth, that the hollows of her clavicle are ticklish. That she is just as charming wrapped around him in her kitchen as she is sitting behind her desk at the office. Desire grips him like a vice.

you just captured their familiarity in a really lovely way. thank you for this.

[abvj]

Oh, I really liked this! You have an interesting Harvey voice, and the whole thing was really well written and respectful to the lines drawn between these two and how easy it would be to just cross them.

Also, lines like this are spectacular:

He dodges a lot of bullets because of her. She looks after him for years.

[bristow1941]

Love it! Because Harvey being vulnerable and open with Donna rocks and I love and adore that Harvey asked her what to pack... And of course Harvey is aware that he needs Donna more than Donna needs him!

And the fact that she decides to go for it in the morning and Harvey still has no clue what is going on - perfection!

[onlywordsnow]

This entire thing is just wonderful. I loved it so much. Please feel free to write more whenever you want because you did the pairing justice for sure.

[phrenitis]

Just absolutely loved this! Great character voices, and a beautiful style to your writing that gave this such a unique feel. The progression was perfectly paced, and the insight we got into the reality of their relationship was lovely. Thanks for writing and sharing. Hope you write more for them!