haven't done this in a while but we'll see what comes out of me

Dec 11, 2003 23:20


send insufficient funds
to render broken lungs
cause we've talked it out
and fought about
nothing for so long

retain oppression's hand
attempt to face demands
while ignorance is bliss
we dont seem to exsist
and nothing will go on

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anonymous December 13 2003, 11:24:31 UTC
i wish i could find a better word for this
but that is beautiful.

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crossyourheartt December 13 2003, 19:16:58 UTC
thank you annonymous

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waste_of_paintt December 15 2003, 17:43:05 UTC
Oh you're welcome...

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__coffee_eyes December 15 2003, 18:03:34 UTC
ah, not as anonymous as i thought

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prettyxlies December 13 2003, 15:17:16 UTC
psh, no one comments anymore.
anyway, that was beautifully written.
you should do this more often even if im the only person who will comment haha.
<33

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crossyourheartt December 13 2003, 19:18:32 UTC
haha thanks so much lorena, and we had fun last night riiiight?
straight outa compton, i cant believe you sang the whole thing.
and i'll get better at commenting as well

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prettyxlies December 13 2003, 19:19:41 UTC
yes we did. oh and im sorry i wouldnt hug you at first, i just didnt know you smoked and it came as a surprise. but i love you :]

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ohsweetmetro December 13 2003, 17:30:38 UTC
I definitely don't know you, but I definitely dig the picture on the background of your lj.

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luuckyme December 13 2003, 22:40:56 UTC
i was wondering what happened to the poems...i love reading them, they make me happy <3...ha, i'm a dork...but yea, sorry for the lack of commenting...i've been craazy busy = ( ...but i'll prob be in cali over christmas, so maybe i'll come over and play? = D
<3eva

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crossyourheartt December 14 2003, 01:47:37 UTC
oh man eva that would make my day(s)

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superrademogirl December 14 2003, 13:58:15 UTC
thats really good.
i wish i could write like you.
<3ronnie

ps. add my new journal jukebox_hustle :]

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