So Tired Chapter 9

May 14, 2013 10:39

Title: So Tired ( Read more... )

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kalliel May 14 2013, 15:39:38 UTC
It's okay, Sam, there's nothing wrong with tap water! XD I really enjoyed this chapter--certainly all kinds of growing up lessons for Sam in this one. And the relentless tension in this household--really well done. Thank you for sharing!

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crowley_gal May 14 2013, 15:44:23 UTC
Thanks for the feedback. I always struggle writing Sam. Glad it worked for you.

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lexophilia May 14 2013, 18:33:28 UTC
I don't know if I feel worse for Dean or Sam at this point. They are both just kids being forced to do adult things. Great update!

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misslightbright May 14 2013, 18:58:04 UTC
I love this story with a passion! I really can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Sam starts to notice Dean's problems and feels guilty about it! Update soon!

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jennytork May 14 2013, 19:20:03 UTC
I agree with all the above -- Sam really needs to be hit by a clue-by-four. Sooner the better!

Good job!!

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frostfalcon May 14 2013, 21:51:20 UTC
I'm hoping this is the start of Sam starting to realize that Dean is doing what he can but the odds are just stacked against him.

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