The Truth Hurts Part 2

May 31, 2011 08:52


The Truth Hurts Part 2

Disclaimer: I still don't own

1983

The yellow cab pulled up to the airport and dropped the young father by the front door, glad that it wasn’t him that had to deal with the two small boys.  The younger cried nonstop and the older one just glared at everyone as if he was mad at the world.  The only time he would speak was ( Read more... )

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mikeysaunt June 1 2011, 01:52:56 UTC
I really like it - very unique angle - that story about the weechesters and John going to that plane trip just broke my heart - poor wee Dean. And I loved Bobby showing up at the end just when Sam was running out of delaying tactics.

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Part 2 moira4eku June 1 2011, 02:15:01 UTC
That was so terribly sad and tragic, it brought tears to my eyes. Dean hadn't really understood his mother was dead and thought he would see her (time is so different for children, especially young ones). You could see when it finally hit Dean that his mother was gone and never coming home. It just killed me! Loved it! Thanks for a great story!

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kayto1 June 1 2011, 02:49:05 UTC
I like the story you wove through here! Nice job and YEAH For the Bobby Rescue!

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msninacat June 1 2011, 11:58:16 UTC
OMG POOR EVERYBODY! ;_; And I'd really like to know what happened to that crystal ball. It sounds awesome! ;D

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maypoles June 9 2011, 20:07:53 UTC
This was very cool; I love what you did with the prompt. ;)

Thanks so much for participating in this challenge.

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