How am I doing with Ava? She's an original character, yes, but I'd like to try and keep her out from being a Mary Sue as much as I can. Considering that she's in the 'In Development' phase, I wouldn't mind some constructive criticism for how I'm doing on her, or what I could do to make her better ( Read more... )

Since Ava is a Jorōgumo, she tends to have a very negative view on humans. Her kind like to lure humans in and eat them up, but much like spiders, they're also fond of snaring other edible creatures if humans are in short supply. Ava also tends to be a little...squicky in speaking. She has no trouble talking about the desire to eat someone right up ( Read more... )

The Dante's Inferno Test has banished you to the Eigth Level of Hell - the Malebolge!
Here is how you matched up against all the levels:
Level Score Purgatory (Repenting Believers) Very Low Level 1 - Limbo (Virtuous Non-Believers) Very Low Level 2 (Lustful) Low Level 3 ( ( Read more... )

Mun Name: Sakon
Journal: queensakon
Contact Info: AIM: QueenSakon
Other Characters: Shiro (B/W Protagonist)

Name:  She doesn't have a true name, but she's adopted the name Ava to distinguish herself.
From: None! She's an Original Character.
Appearance: A monster wearing the clothes of a sheep.
Age: 408, if you want to be precise. She's only spent 8 of those years ( Read more... )