FIC: gone in search of refuge

[cruiscin_lan]

Title: gone in search of refuge
Characters: Finn/Quinn
Word Count: 1153
Rating: R
Disclaimer: If I owned Glee all proceeds would go towards the Howard Bamboo Legal Defense Fund.
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers up to "Sectionals," warning for dubcon and dark themes.
Summary: You said you'd do anything to make it okay.
A/N: Well, this is the opposite of

Comments

[becca_radcgg]

Dude! What have you done to my Finn?!?!?!??!

It kills that he's so destroyed that he'd do that to her then realize how empty it is anyway. Intimacy can't be faked. *sigh*

His breath feels warm and wet and it makes the small hairs on the back of her neck stand up.

I love this line. It's so beautifully descriptive, an ominous foreshadow of the things to come.

[cruiscin_lan]

I'm sorry, Finn!

I don't know. I just get the urge to write some really dark stuff sometimes. At least your drabbles exist to counter my ficlet, y/y?

[fuzzy_paint]

So, this hurt. A LOT.

I love the contrast between the beginning and the ending parts. He's still trying to help her out/still being a decent guy, even if he is pissed. He's letting her stay there, at least until she has a different place to stay there.

And then, oh damn, and then.

You have such a way with words. Sigh.

(also, I love how Mrs. H is worrying over the whereabouts of her son. shining moment of - I don't want to say happiness, so maybe ...? IDK - in this very dark and unhappy fic)

[cruiscin_lan]

I KEEP HURTING YOU. MY BAD.

(I had to include Mrs. Hudson I think to keep myself from falling into a completely angsty pit of despair.)

[boysinperil]

His breath feels warm and wet and it makes the small hairs on the back of her neck stand up.

I'll second Becca, this is a wonderfully creepy line.

[cruiscin_lan]

Thanks, I think. ;)

[kathrynthegr8]

Damn, girl! That was dark. I loved it. Very well done and wonderfully creepy.

[cruiscin_lan]

I'm so glad you liked it! While writing this I thought "Hey, even if no one else reads it, I bet Kat would.":)

[biruuu]

Oh, man. So sad for everybody involved. Each scene was more heartbreaking than the last one.

At first it was weird trying to picture Finn as scary since he's so sweet in canon, but we did get to see a more aggresive side of him in Sectionals, so if he got drunk, it's plausible that he may react like that.

It was short but really powerful. I really liked it.

[cruiscin_lan]

...we did get to see a more aggresive side of him in Sectionals, so if he got drunk, it's plausible that he may react like that.

I hope we never find out for sure!

Thanks for reading!