Comments | crujones: left of self-centered

crujones

left of self-centered

Nov 30, 2004 17:02

Been meaning to update for the past couple of days, but you know how that goes. Right now I'm at work and can't get on the server (too many users connected) to continue working on anything...so fuck it ( Read more... )

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idigforfire November 30 2004, 15:34:34 UTC

bringing it back? It never left!!
ps. show was good, sorry about drunk Julia :\

crujones November 30 2004, 17:18:51 UTC

apparently licking my face is cool!

idigforfire November 30 2004, 18:02:25 UTC

then consider her Miles Davis

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crujones November 30 2004, 17:21:46 UTC

yeah, i think you may be right.

although the people i saw over thanksgiving break aren't the people i hung out with in high school, or the ones i'd be genuinely interested in hearing from/about

311_grl November 30 2004, 19:41:21 UTC

u were at sylvan street!!! i knew i shoulda went to homecoming!

crujones December 1 2004, 10:39:56 UTC

yeah in salisbury, not danvers...

crowhurst December 1 2004, 06:01:20 UTC

8 ARMS TO HOLD YOU WAS AN AMAZING ALBUM.

"I'd like to add/fix/whatever...so as always suggestions are welcome!"

My only critique of the site is that it's written WAY too awkwardly for me to take seriously. It's written in a group third person which reads sort of comically and pretentiously at the same time, as if someone wrote it for you or something. In my opinion, that seems to create an overhype that you guys don't really need. You are good enough, you have enough hype among the bands you've played with and people you know. You could write that in group first person (i.e.: "We played an amazing show the other night..." instead if "On The Surface played an epic and triumphant show the other night.") It's just a little bit distracting and difficult to read. It's like a command -- On The Surface ARE _____ -- and it's coming from some anonymous, un-named third party. Someone is informing me and I have no idea who that is. It isn't the band because they'd have used "We are _____."

Just something to think about? Otherwise, looks FAB.

crujones December 1 2004, 10:39:41 UTC

thanks man. actually heather wrote it. so technically someone else did write it...but i see your point, and will more than likely heed the advice.

heathecliff December 1 2004, 13:03:07 UTC

sure blame me, asshole!!! haha just kidding. he's right.

i think we need to get our names on there asap. haha.

crujones December 1 2004, 13:11:53 UTC

i've been able to make some small changes about every other day. however, the links and the bio stuff will have to wait til this weekend.

i_hate_machines December 3 2004, 13:12:44 UTC

You need a whole page on that site dedicated to all your jailbait fans...

What? Too soon?