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The Difference Between Then and Now, Chad/Ryan, G

Mar 17, 2008 02:03

Title: The Difference Between Then and Now
Author: crumbfreebread
Rating: G
Summary: Chad thinks he knows which one is older...
Notes: This was written for kleenexcow! I hope you enjoy it, and I hope you like the way I interpreted your prompt!

( If anyone had asked him... )

chyan, ff100

Comments 20

slytherin_gypsy March 17 2008, 11:56:28 UTC

Oh, this was so lovely! I love the way you portrayed Ryan and Sharpay's relationship and that you made Chad not only understand it, but also respect it so much.

crumbfreebread March 17 2008, 13:59:12 UTC

thank you so much! i'm so glad you enjoyed it!

applepiecrust March 17 2008, 12:23:08 UTC

Aww... this is cute.
Much as I'd love to see stories wit dialogue and everything, this is really good too and you do a good job of portraying te interaction between characters without actually using dialogue.
I love the final Ryan and Sharpay scene.

crumbfreebread March 17 2008, 13:56:26 UTC

this movement away from dialogue has really been a change for me. i much prefer to write dialogue than introspection, but it was fun to try it out! thank you so much for your kind review!

nevcolleil March 17 2008, 12:37:35 UTC

Aw, what a fresh look at Ryan and Sharpay. I love how you portray their relationship through Chad's eyes and the thought of Ryan as the mature, steady one. Great job.

crumbfreebread March 17 2008, 13:55:13 UTC

thank you very much!

jalabert March 17 2008, 13:24:08 UTC

So what was the prompt? I'd like to know.

This was a very different story, providing an interesting glimpse at the siblings' relationship. I also like the unique spin you put on Sharpay's character. I think she would totally get along with Chad. (And now I've got to put off my story idea on just that friendship for a little while...) ;)

Are there more coming?

crumbfreebread March 17 2008, 13:54:56 UTC

the prompt was that Chad contemplates Ryan and Sharpay's birth order, which I thought was really interesting and fun to explore.

yeah, actually, there are a LOT more coming. the fics i've been writing lately are all a part of this prompt table:

http://crumbfreebread.livejournal.com/8846.html

thanks for your review!

dtkokoro March 17 2008, 15:55:49 UTC

aww! adorable! so cute! <3<3 You make me all warm inside.

crumbfreebread March 18 2008, 05:01:04 UTC

thank you! im glad i was able to achieve that!