I'm kind of speechless after reading this. It was porn but not tactless at all. I dunno how to say it but you wrote it in such a sensual way. It's like you're the Jun in the fic. By the way, here's my favorite part:
“Because your face reads so innocent that I wanted to take it away from you,” Jun smiled. A shiver ran down Nino’s spine before he looked over at the elevator. “Thank you,” he said before turning around.
The plot was good and dragging on the hot part was a good call. Thank you for sharing!
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You write so damn good ♥
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ah~ *blush* thanks you ♥
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i will try to work on the next chapter...if my brain can cooperate xD
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This was SO HOT!
I'm really excited about this, you know? :o
it's really great how you were able to paint this whole situation!!
awwww :3
Thanks for sharing ♥
I'm gonna dream about this tonight XD
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:3 thank you~
i am working on the rest of this fic but im being sidetracked by a contest haha xD.
thanks once again for reading~
sweet dreams :3
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“Because your face reads so innocent that I wanted to take it away from you,” Jun smiled. A shiver ran down Nino’s spine before he looked over at the elevator. “Thank you,” he said before turning around.
The plot was good and dragging on the hot part was a good call. Thank you for sharing!
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i'm glad you didnt think it was porn with no substance
thanks for reading ^^
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