Life's No Love Story

Feb 04, 2012 01:13

Title: Life’s No Love Story
Rating: R
Pairing: Yamapair
Summary: He gets him into this lifestyle, now he struggles to get him out.
Disclaimer: I do not know nor am I any of the mentioned characters. This is just a work of fiction, nothing is true.
A/N: Entered and won second place in the Oretachinosong contest.
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slash, p: ohno satoshi/ sakurai sho, r: r

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weiss_kreuz101 February 4 2012, 07:12:52 UTC
I love this story so much. The way you portrayed the members is amazing and so heart felt and I pulled for Sho, Nino and Ohno all the way! Thank you for posting this and I'm gonna re-read it so many times!

I love that Sho was able to help Ohno with his addiction and that in turn Ohno was able to help Sho get out of the 'life'

And Nino the brat! Get out of jail soon ok!?

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cry1baby February 25 2012, 06:50:56 UTC
Sorry for the late reply [rl has been bothering me]

but thank you so much hun
it was quite hard to write cause i felt stuck at times and was worried it wouldnt be portrayed right haha.

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yun_miyake February 4 2012, 15:56:30 UTC
thanks for sharing
I'm a little bit sad when Sho and Nino didn't comeback that night.
Ohno must be so lonely and worry waiting for them, but in the end Sho can find Ohno again, I'm so glad ^^

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cry1baby February 25 2012, 06:51:15 UTC
thanks hun and thanks for reading ^^

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nekochan_lia February 4 2012, 17:08:07 UTC
This fic have an interesting concepts XD
At first, it's hard for me imagining the boys having such a dark life
but after i read it, the story started comin on to me
sho and ohno were both being stubborn but finally they're willing to admit that they care for each other.

nice happy ending XD

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cry1baby February 25 2012, 06:52:17 UTC
yeah everything about this fic is very OOC-AU but it was fun yet hard to do ahaha
thanks for reading~

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shinigamiami February 4 2012, 23:57:36 UTC
This was amazing, too bad you stopped it there.... I mean, it's fitting, but as a fangirl, I'd have liked it to be even longer XD -too obsessed-

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cry1baby February 25 2012, 06:52:53 UTC
haha thanks hun
yeah if i didnt write this for a contest i'd def make this a chaptered fic haha

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jorian1108 February 6 2012, 22:39:42 UTC
Oh, it is sooo.... different. i must say I liked it, still made me feel sort of sad...
Can you tell it was a happy ending? I hope everything will turn well for the guys...

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cry1baby February 25 2012, 06:54:03 UTC
haha yes
mm well i made the ending ambiguous in the sense we dont know if Nino will get out or if Ohno and Sho will start dating, so its more up to the reader if they went to make it a happy ending ^^

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