Modern Day Pygmalion Pt.2/Finale

Aug 28, 2012 17:06

Title: Modern Day Pygmalion Pt.2
Pairing: Junba
Summary: Jun receives a sex doll as a joke, it no longer become a joke when the doll comes to life.
Rating: R-NC-17
Disclaimer: Nothing is real in this fic. Just a load of fiction...

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slash, #oneshot, r: r, r: nc-17, p: aiba masaki/ matsumoto jun/ sakurai s

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kokkaii August 28 2012, 23:19:41 UTC
I was a bit wary of reading this, but I'm glad I did! Love it! I thought it would be fun and light (so much comedic material with a sex doll coming to life XD), and then you delved into depression (how Jun is lonely and unsatisfied with how his personal and work life is turning out) and desperation, and even when Aiba finally became human, you didn't let up with the emotional roller coaster. Jun's parents didn't approve and that sucked so much. Aiba sloooooowly turning back into a doll got me so bad - it really is like watching someone you loved dying.
All that tragedy only made their happy parts happier. I teared up at the countdown. Oh, Jun was going to buy him cake T_T

Thanks for this wonderful fic! I'm super glad you came back <3

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cry1baby August 28 2012, 23:46:44 UTC
Haha yeah I think i was going to make it a soft and light fic but during my course of writing so much had happened that the direction totally changed.

Thanks for giving it a chance xD and i'm glad i'm back <33

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shinigamiami August 28 2012, 23:20:57 UTC
So can I say "WELCOME BACK"?! Your fics are amazing, and it's good to have you back :D

Oh my god, I cried. I cried so hard, and this was simply too beautiful.

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cry1baby August 28 2012, 23:43:39 UTC
thank you bb <3
it both makes me happy that u cried cause it means i did good yet sad cause i made you cry >.<

thanks for reading and glad to be back

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shinigamiami August 29 2012, 00:26:22 UTC
It's okay! You can make me cry as much as you want! (I'm not a DoM, I swear) haha

Thanks for writing! :D

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cry1baby August 29 2012, 00:38:59 UTC
LOL its the pain of us fangirls...we become minor DoMs

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yukimahou August 28 2012, 23:28:52 UTC
I don't usually read Arashi fics... but... omg... you made me cry!!! Aiba!!! T.T

that was really well written.. I liked it

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cry1baby August 28 2012, 23:44:52 UTC
oh haha, you read KATTUN? all this is assumed by your icon of ueda >.<

but im glad you read it and enjoyed it...even to the point of tears @_@

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yukimahou August 29 2012, 09:14:07 UTC
Un, I sometimes dip into News though and others :)

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cry1baby August 29 2012, 15:47:57 UTC
oooh yeah i read a lil bit of other Johnny's but primarily i read and write Arashi haha

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r_tenou August 29 2012, 00:27:11 UTC
This fic was so completely bizarre and wonderful and augh. The feels. I'm having a hard time coming up with the proper words to express what you have just done to my heart. I just... I love it. I absolutely love it. All of it. The humor and the tragedy and the sweetness of it all. I mean, it's a story about a sex doll coming to life and you managed to turn that over on its head and put some real, engaging emotion in there, and THAT takes some real talent. Now I'm gonna go, before I lose all sense of coherency, and stew in this vat of emotions that you've forced me into. :P

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cry1baby August 29 2012, 00:40:22 UTC
*blushes*
stahp you making me blush ^///^
lol but glad you got feels from this bizzare story xD and of course thanks for reading <33

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r_tenou August 29 2012, 00:42:26 UTC
I caaaaaan't help it. XD It was THAT good. I'm still not over it!

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cry1baby August 29 2012, 00:48:29 UTC
*throws cookies at you*
<3 thanks hun~

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fluffyneen August 29 2012, 00:35:49 UTC
At first I was all agskjahsglkahg about you coming back but now after reading it... Oh. My. God. Never have I had such a rollercoaster of feels from a fic, I'm still sort of numbed right now and I think you had me legit crying for most of part 2, but the hour i spent reading this was just amazing. My heart has been broken into a million tiny pieces and my eyes are red (lol my uncle just happened to come knock on my door 2 seconds after I finished reading this fic and he had to ask if I was okay XD) but it feels completely worth it. This piece is really a gem, a fucking masterpiece. A++++++ Thank you soooo much for writing ♥

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cry1baby August 29 2012, 00:41:40 UTC
ah >.< thank you hun
*offers tissues*
I'm glad it got this reaction from you <33
and of course i'm glad you read it and to be back

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fluffyneen August 31 2012, 01:21:19 UTC
You must have prepared a huge stock of tissues and cookies at the rate you're giving them out XD But it really was wonderful, thank you :) Looking forward to your future stories too ^^

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cry1baby August 31 2012, 03:17:03 UTC
lmao frequent trips to the store as well xDD
im currently making another junba for my multichap that was abandoned >.< i wanted it out today, but with the hour i got i might get it out around 1am xD

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