I once had this idea too to make interactive stories, but all the work... And trying to be creative with the different choices. You did that really good! I actually like the bad endings more than the good ones. And of course, Cry ! How did I not recognized his description. I can listen to him for ever *.*
I like the idea of Ian being the 'master' and Anthony being his 'toy'. Too bad the scene at their first night wasn't in it ;)
I didn't know your writing was this good. No, it really is!
Lol, I was beginning to think that no one was gonna read this and I was just like, lol, oh well. But thank you soo much. YOU WATCH CRY TOO? So dreamy, I can't stop watching him...though the weird thing is he wasn't actually supposed to be a main character and just turned into one. And the reason why their first night wasn't in it? I can't write smut lolol...I tried my best with the foreplay :) I'm glad you preferred the bad endings! It makes me happy because I wrote those last :) Thanks so much for reading, I mean seriously, it means a lot. :)
Everyone is probably on vacation or have no time to comment. That's mostly my problem :p I read on my phone but mu connection is too bad to post a comment, but for this one I went on the pc wrote one :)
Cry <3
Yeah, the bad endings were good! They were so unexpected. Like bam they have magic powers, and Ian murdering Anthony (the poet, you made that yourself? )
Lol yeah, i couldn't be bothered enough to skim through millions of poems so i made one up plus its author. ;) CRY <3 Thanks for taking the time to go on the PC to write a comment :)
which bad ending was ur favourite? (He get jealous <3)
No, thank you. You're the one that deserves some sort of internet award....fanfic related...or at least a reward for making me have more feels than the ocean has water. :P
Ahahaha, you really did comment on every one of the sections apart from one XD I'm SO SO SO SO SOOOO glad you liked it, really it took ages. I kinda liked Cry with Ian though XD although this is Ianthony. Cry is far too understated, he needs a bigger presence in the fan fiction community.
Thank you for reading and as ever thank you for commenting, I'm honestly sitting here in my schools study centre smiling like a total noob because of your far too nice comments. To think (Cry) the butler creeped you out at the beginning, makes me lol, so thank you again so much. Also, you're like the best writer in the community, if you wrote one of these I would die and never live again because of all the amazingness of the story.
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I once had this idea too to make interactive stories, but all the work... And trying to be creative with the different choices.
You did that really good! I actually like the bad endings more than the good ones.
And of course, Cry ! How did I not recognized his description. I can listen to him for ever *.*
I like the idea of Ian being the 'master' and Anthony being his 'toy'. Too bad the scene at their first night wasn't in it ;)
I didn't know your writing was this good. No, it really is!
I will watch your writings. Be warned~
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But thank you soo much.
YOU WATCH CRY TOO? So dreamy, I can't stop watching him...though the weird thing is he wasn't actually supposed to be a main character and just turned into one. And the reason why their first night wasn't in it? I can't write smut lolol...I tried my best with the foreplay :)
I'm glad you preferred the bad endings! It makes me happy because I wrote those last :)
Thanks so much for reading, I mean seriously, it means a lot. :)
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That's mostly my problem :p I read on my phone but mu connection is too bad to post a comment, but for this one I went on the pc wrote one :)
Cry <3
Yeah, the bad endings were good! They were so unexpected. Like bam they have magic powers, and Ian murdering Anthony (the poet, you made that yourself? )
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CRY <3
Thanks for taking the time to go on the PC to write a comment :)
which bad ending was ur favourite? (He get jealous <3)
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Thank you for reading and as ever thank you for commenting, I'm honestly sitting here in my schools study centre smiling like a total noob because of your far too nice comments. To think (Cry) the butler creeped you out at the beginning, makes me lol, so thank you again so much. Also, you're like the best writer in the community, if you wrote one of these I would die and never live again because of all the amazingness of the story.
ANIME FANFICTIONS FOR THE WIN. XD
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