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[crygne_rose]

this is what i'm looking to enter for the short story competition.. comments would be awesome

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[scum_fuck_punk]

I like it!

PS: He gives heavenly backrubs.

[ex_syrinx877]

your writing flows really well, and i think it's very well written, but i also think it's more of a fictional essay than a short story. and i also think i'm being nit-picky.
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good luck sarahface! kick that adam morey in the face (figuratively)!