[fanfic] Really a stranger?! (JaeMin "Unseen Beauty" verse - Part 1)

Feb 14, 2010 01:47

Title: Really a stranger?! (JaeMin "Unseen Beauty" verse - Part 1)

Pairing: JaeMin

Genre: AU. fluff. sad.

Rating: PG

Words: 815

Warning: none

Summary: Changmin tells him that he always wanted to work with people who are disadvantaged and Jaejoong interrupts him that he isn’t disadvantaged.

Thanks to: my beta engbreakfast  <33

Disclaimer: Don't own ( Read more... )

unseen beauty au, "really a stranger?!", {dbsk}, [jaemin], *fanfic

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kitkii February 14 2010, 00:55:18 UTC
omg ;; crying. this is so sad, so touching. i love the way you write them, i love this.

poor jae, but omg. changmin makes it all better :D /shot.♥

sorry for letting you down and not being able to read this earlier. it is fantastic though, so please don't think you even need me ♥

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dongbangsuju20 February 14 2010, 01:00:36 UTC
don't cry ;^;
it shouldn't be sad .-. lol but somehow jaemin is always a bit sad?!
thank you~
that means so much to me~


yeah, somehow I had this image in my head and I just didn't want to explain where and why and all that, so just this little scene~

don't apologize, darling <3
silly~ *cuddles*

but you are wrong, I need you, I really need you~
*clings*
thank you for keeping up with my demands and for reading all these stories~
thank you very much for being there (and it doesn't matter how fast you read something <3)
ilu

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adorable_hotaru February 14 2010, 06:57:43 UTC
it very beautiful , you wrap everything at end the end very nicely XD. I'm glad Jae accepted Min to be in his live and heart. “Even now you are so beautiful that it breaks my heart to know that you will never see it for yourself.” There something in that phrase Min said touch me.

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dongbangsuju20 February 16 2010, 17:07:10 UTC
thank you very much <3

aw, thank you for quoting that back to me
I appreciate that feedback ^-^

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haizul February 14 2010, 09:57:42 UTC
oh oh gosh ♥

just so lovely and beautifully written. i think i've said that too in another of your jaemin fics lol but really, i love the way you write, its... i don't know how to describe it. soft? it gives that calming feeling. every time i read your works :)

jae is heartbreaking, but changmin is there and that's all that matters ^^ ♥

thank you for writing JaeMin! Happy Valentines :D ♥

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dongbangsuju20 February 16 2010, 17:11:31 UTC
awww ♥

thank you, that is such a flattery ;^;
*honored*
i am so glad you like my writing style~
biggest compliment you could make <33

yes, right~ ♥

thank you for reading and liking it
(actually this could~ be a valentines fic, though I didn't really planned to make it as one lol)
happy belated valentines ♥ XD
i hope yours was good ^-^

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pawshingo February 14 2010, 14:29:22 UTC
It's so sweet, gentle and touching. I like the bit where Jae can sense the hesitant breath! Love it!

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dongbangsuju20 February 16 2010, 17:12:47 UTC
i hoped it made sense to someone, since it is kinda random there, but I am glad you liked it ^-^

thank you for reading and the comment <3
it makes me happy to see such comments, thank you very much ♥

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wordlesslove February 16 2010, 00:22:27 UTC
this is so beautiful~

i like the idea of blind&deaf!jaejoong, i've never seen him portrayed like this before. it's nice to see him depicted as someone other than the one doing all the comforting, seeing him as the one that needs comfort.

i like how you described them without having to actually describe them, describing them from the perspective of the blind person.

i really liked reading this (and it's definitely a fic that gets mem'd)!

♥♥♥♥♥

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dongbangsuju20 February 16 2010, 17:15:29 UTC
(he is not deaf, but just can't speak and is blind, but that's okay <3)

but yes, you are right~
i am glad you liked this idea ^^
maybe I will continue this idea and develop it further or something like that
(your comment suddenly made me think of a verse where they are like that lol... I will think about it, thank you ^^)

aw, i like how you described the style of this fic, haha
thank you very much. it feels great to read such things, really thank you for taking the time and reading and writing such a lovely comment. I appreciate it ♥

omg even mem'd ;^;
thank you so much ♥
*flail*
♥ ♥ ♥

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